FCE+(10,+11,+12)

Hello guys :), Looking forward to seeing your writings. Good luck, H. Akbarimehr

Dear Mr. Jarvis , I am writing to apply for your EFL exam courses in Modcaser University which has been published in the newspaper advertisement. I would like to apply for a part-time course in English as a foreign language that prepare students for the Cambridge University exams: - English for FCE I am a 23-year-old university student, and I am getting my BS(B.Sc.) certificate in translating French language almost six month later. I have completed many courses in English language one year ago, and after that I have been started teaching in some institutes and sometimes in private. I am really keen to (to be keen on doing sth) have various certificates from reliable institutions like Modcaser University, and it is a positive point for me when I am looking for a job. In addition (to) my interest in English causes I go and finish it fulfilling (successfully). You can find my CV regarding to my experiences in the attachment. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely , **//‍Nazli Mohajeri ‍//**

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Dear Mr Jarvis,

I am writing in response to your advertisement in the newspaper for the EFL exam courses of Modcaster university .I would like to apply for part time courses in English for FCE. I am 17 years old and have just finished my high school. my education at high school was math I enclose my high school report card (I have enclosed my result card) with full of information about my qualifications and the Skills that I have. Az you can see in my report card I have achieved good marks at my intermediate Level. I would very like to study at your university because I like to improve my English and I think that Your teachers might be better than the other places and I‍ believe that studying English abroad is Very helpful because English is the main language there so if we want to communicate with others You have to speak in English ‍. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely **Marjan Rezazade** Enc. report card

I would like to increase my abilities in english and get FCE degree as soon as possible with help of your institute.
=== I have studied civil engineering in Ms, and I consider myself to continue my education in ‍ca ‍mbridge university. So, I need to have this degree. ===

your faithfully
**// Sanaz Moazzenchi //**

**Dear sir/madam:** (You should use comma, not colon) **I am writing in response to your advertisment in the weekly newspaper for FCE exam courses in english** (English) **as a forieign language and i** ( I is always capital) **am a FCE student.****I am 27 years old and as for my qualifications, i have licentiates** (what?? KILL YOU :)!! BA or BSc) **degree i Azad university in****Tehran moreover I have completed a degree for intermediate level of english.****I enclose my cv with full details of information about my qualifications and work experience,****I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.**

**‍Shiva Pedram**
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**I'm good with the kids and I am so patient.**
===**I really love to study at your istitute** (spelling error??!) **and learn english as a forieign** (again spelling ?:) ) **language at the level of FCE, I have writen** (spelling) **my cv** (cv is written in capital letters) **with full information about my qualifications and work experience.**===

**Pantea Fayazi**

 * Thank you Pantea, quite a good job, however, you shouldn't have spelling mistakes in here ;)! Notice your mistakes which are mostly spelling, punctuation and letter formatting! Hanieh **

Hi misssssssssss! see i do"t forget to say miss here it is my and honey writing or unit 10.love u. Hello there, thanks for your nice words, try to say 'Miss' in class too :)! ;) Hanieh

Dear MR Jarvis (You need a comma here) I am writing in response to your advertisement in the Daily News for EFL exam courses. I would welcome the opportunity to spend my time in a various and sundry part-time courses in English. I would be grateful if you could tell me do (if students have to ....) the students have to learn the whole of courses? Can we choose the courses? I will choose just FCE and CAE.I have just completed a degree in cartography at technical university. I wish to study there because I heart every things about your university. (You cannot use 'heart' as a verb, besides it's an informal language, not appropriate for a formal letter/Email) I heart that your certificate and your courses are very popular. (Again the same as above) Yours sincerely (You need a comma here) Honieh ASbaghi Thanks Hanieh, good job, careful about your mistakes mentioned in purple. Thank you :)!

Dear MR Jarvis I am writing in response to your advertisement in the Daily News for EFL exam courses. I would welcome the opportunity to spend my time in a various and sundry part-time courses in English. I am 17 and I have got Math degree in Hanahan university.I want to be student in your FCE courses. I want to be a hart sergon in Cambrige university.‍so ‍ I have to be a good speaker for my interview but my English is not very good and I want to be successesful but in my contry I could not because gril can not be sergaon.so I wishstudy at your EFL exam courses to inproving my English Your turtfuly Sarah Shafaei

**Dear Mr Jarvis**
I recently saw your advertisement in a newspaper for the part-time or full-time courses for EFL. i am very love to take a part in full-time courses for FCE. (I is always written in a capital letter) I am 25 years old and im studing in TORONTO university of canada. I am an architect and i can speak and write english very well.

I really love to continue my lessons in your university to prove my skills about my eng lish and my major.

Here is my CV with lots of information about my qualification. I look forward to getting a reply.

yours sincerely

= ‍GHAZAL*** KAKAVAND ‍ =

I am writing in response to your advertisement in the London evening news for the EFL examination of Modcaster university.I would like to attend a part-time course in English for FCE.
I am a 21 year old university student and I am studing civil Engineering in London City University.I have just completed a certificate in English at Shelffield University.I have 4 years experience of being an interpreter of an international company.

I am really k een to study (keen on doing sth) in your university because it is a chance to improve my English and also meet native teachers and different people from all around the world.

I enclose my CV with full details of my experience.I look forward to hearing from you.

yours sincerely

‍Niloofar ‍.Ghaffari

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