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Start writing, looking forward to seeing you in here!!! Bestest, Hanieh Hi,I am Elnaz.When I was child my parents made me clean ==> a child my bedroom but,they let me after cleaning there I went out===> let me go out after..... and played with my friend.I was not forced to do my homework as soon as I got home from school.I was allowed to stay out until 21:00 at night.I was supposed to study for low. Best wishes Elnaz Thanks Elnaz:)! >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Hi, I am samira. when I was a child my parents made me take care of my brothers and sister.because I am first kid the family. this was first responsibility. so still i have this responsibility . my parents let me go alone to buy the things that i liked to buy such as: chips, candy, chewing gum and..... Nowadays, many parents don't allow children to go the store alone, because they are concerned about people in society who are deviant and other dangers around them.  I think , when i was allowed to go out shopping and see dangers around me, i could choose , what i wanted the freedom and my money?  A beautiful of my children is, I was supposed to become carpenter or mechanic . However, that was my opinion and my parents wanted - like all parents- that I become an engineer or doctor.  I was forced to sleep at noon. this in childhood was terrible for me.because I wanted to play with other children. they were in our neighborhood and I heard the voice of their happiness. but besides the bad memories, I highly memorable and beautiful memories of my childhood love for the sweet memories of my parents, I am very grateful

Thanks you Samira, well done!:) <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<  Hi,I am __**Simin**__   When I was a child my parents made me take shower alone and clean my room.  They let me watch TV just for kid programs and they didn't let me watch a movie and the other things.  I was forced to wake up early ever on holidays.  I wasn't allowed to play with my friends out late at night .  I was supposed to study my lessons very well.  although my parents were strictest but they guide me that I became a successful person for society and I thank my parents. ==> when y have although you shouldn't use 'but' in the second sentence! Thanks.  >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

**Thank you Mahsa! well done!**
Hi,I'm __**negin**__ when i was a child my parents made me clean my room. They didn't let me to stay in my friend's home and they didn't allow me go on holiday on my own.I always have to do my homework before supper.I supposed to study lessons very well.At the other hand they let me go to my friend's house and i was allowed to go out with my friends when i became older.Although my parents were __**stricts**__ but they __**guid**__ me and now I'm top girl,I thank my lovely parents.

__**﻿Hi**__ ,I`m __**Elnaz**__ Six things you don`t know about me Thank you Elnaz:)!
 * 1) I was born and raised in Tehran,Iran.
 * 2) I moved to __**Karaj**__ at the age of 17.
 * 3) I can be easygoing.I like to make relationship with other people.
 * 4) I`m __**studing**__ computer engineering at __**azad**__ university.
 * 5) I`m a humble person, I never like to proud myself. ==> like to be proud!
 * 6) I started painting, when I was a child

whene **i was a child my** parente **made me eat food more than my capacity.**
 * Hi i am**
 * They let me play with my friends in alley so my cloths be came dirty and earthly.**
 * I forced to go bathroom after playing .=====>> I was forced to...**
 * I was allowed to go my grand mothers house** whene **i wanted and** stey **there and allowed me to go every where with my aunt .**
 * I was supposed to came back home after school but i** didnt **do that and i went to park with my friend**.


 * ===> I was supposed to come**
 * Hi i,m** Hosna
 * I was born and raised in tehran==> tehran**
 * I was very competitive in school i went to university at 18**
 * I am** studing **politics i love my course very much**
 * I love to be a diplomat==>wow!! why??? interesting!**
 * I have talent in calligraphy and love to hold an** axhibited????what????? axhibited????
 * I am book worm and i'm** enjoing **from reading novels==> a book worm**

**I love sports** espesially **swimming and feel relax with** swiming
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**Hi Hani.
> Hey Bita:)!**==== //**1.I was born & raised in Tehran(Babak hospital).**//
 * Six things U don"t know about me...**
 * 2.At the age 7,I started to learn swim. ==>Swimming**
 * //3.I am totally reliable & honest.my friends can always count on me for solve their problems.//**
 * //4.I am an accomplished hair-dresser.I took my hair-dresser diploma at the age 18.I want to have beauty sallon very soon.//**
 * //5.I can speak two languages,English & Germany...now I study Germany at universiy.//**
 * //6.My favorite person is Paris Hilton &&& I love drive. ===> I love to drive//**
 * //Bitaaaaaaaa//**
 * //Thank you Bita:)!//**
 * //hi//** Im fateme
 * //my childhood was perfect .I was free .I was allowed to go out any time I like; but with my brother!//**
 * //I was never forced to do my home work because my parents counted on me,as cleaning my room and helping at home.//**
 * //except playing with play station.I had to play just for one hour.when I grew up became more responsible .I had to learn cooking and living alone because I was ging to an other city for studing when I was 14.//**
 * //hi Im fateme again!//**
 * //1.I was born and raised in mobarak city.//**
 * //2.I left home when I was 14 for studing.//**
 * //3.Im talented in drawing and writing.//**
 * //4.I enjoy reading and writing poem.//**
 * //5.I was always plaing football with boys and now with my friends.//**
 * //6.I love cooking and my fathr says Im accomplished on it.//**
 * //Hi,I'm Negin again!//**
 * //1.I was born and raised in tehran(Azadi hospital).//**
 * //2.At the age of 11,I started to learn swim.===>swimming//**
 * //3.I'm totally honest with my friends and they always can count on me for solve their problems.==> to solve/f or solving//**
 * //4.My favorit actor is Wentworth Miller &&& love drive.//**
 * //5.I played basketball in my school three years ago.//**
 * //6.I'm able to dance hiphup very well.==> wow! Let's see next session!:))//**
 * //Hi,i'm pardis norouzinia//**
 * //When i was a child my parents made me go to bed early.//**
 * //They let me go out with my aunt and her children.//**
 * //I was forced to eat enough food because i was very thin.//**
 * //I//** **//was allowed to play with my friends.//**
 * //I was supposed to lern studing & talking.//**
 * //Hi,i'm pardis norouzinia again. ==> pardis Norou....//**
 * //Five things you don't know about me://**
 * //1.I was born in esfahan and raised in tehran.//**
 * //2.I moved to tehran at age of one.//**
 * //3.I can be very reliable & the other can tell me their secrets because theire secrets will be been just betwen me and god.//**
 * //4.I'm good at sports,i'm a athletic. ==>athletic is an adjective, no "a"!//**
 * //5.I have a big collection of sports things,i'm also very good at sports.//**
 * //Thank you Pardis, nice job!//**
 * Hello people!:) (Hanieh-Akbarimehr) **
 * I see that finally you decided to come and write your writings! Thank you...I will read them all in details and check the grammar and vocabulary till the weekend! **
 * Stay well! :) **
 * //5.I have a big collection of sports things,i'm also very good at sports.//**
 * //Thank you Pardis, nice job!//**
 * Hello people!:) (Hanieh-Akbarimehr) **
 * I see that finally you decided to come and write your writings! Thank you...I will read them all in details and check the grammar and vocabulary till the weekend! **
 * Stay well! :) **
 * Stay well! :) **

{hi!!!!!!! i'm hani jingo0l!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!}

when i was child my parents made me to sleep soon at night!as so0n as hen sleep. and i was force to answer with YES when they called me i hate do that yet!===> made me sleep but they let me to go out for play games with my friends from 5:00pm until 9:30 pm.===>let+base form!!! let me go i was allow to do whatever i want to do cause if they force me to do something i never do it and maybe i do that in worse way1!!!!!!==> I was allowed to.... so it's better to don't force me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. i was suppoest to be polite and quiet in parties.now i can't always be quiet but at least i'm polite.===> I was supposed to.... i was so naughty and i did every bad works and i teach my friend's to be same as me therefor none of my friend's mothers let them to came to our hose at all. finally i was so bad and unchangable!!!!!! byby



HANI JINGO0L

5 things you don't know about me,...

1.I was born in Tehran and raised here too! 2.I can play classic gitar abit! 3.I am very active,naughty ,funny,helpfull,HONEST

4.I have a lot of records like going out of class,be in school office with my mother and stuff like that ) lol...awesome!) 5.I am an accomplished swimmer and basketballist.i like sport!!!!!!!!!!!!!!==>sportS Thank you Hani Jingool

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Hi! I'm sarenaz. when I was a chaild my mother made me help her about the house.====> child My parents let me cycling with my friends. ==> let me go cycling I was forced to do all of my homework. I was allowed to buy ice cream,chocolate and ... from the nearest shop when i was played with my friend. I was supposed to my childhood was very good.

Five things you dont know about me(sarenaz)... Thank you Sarenaz:)!
 * 1) I was born and raised in Tehran.
 * 2) I never moved to another city for living.
 * 3) I try to be reliable that my friends can trust me.===> so that.....
 * 4) I'm so optimistic about every thing.
 * 5) I'm supportive of my family.

I am Simin again. six things you don,t know about me 1- I was born and raised in Tehran. 2- At the age of 18 I passed in Shahid Beheshti university in nursing major. 3- I can be a demending person because I like these person. ==>people 4- I work in Shariati Hospital in neurosurgery ward. (WOW! Excellent!) 5- I think (that) I am an accomplished manager in my job because I do my works as well as I can. 6- I started playing the keyboard when I was 25 years old, after that I got married and I couldn,t continue. This is the second message that I send it for you. Someone maybe delete the first one because I send it yesterday for you. Thank you Simin, Well done!

Hi, I'm mahbanoo When I was==> a child not child/ child my parents made me take after my sibling. They let me play in garden in the evening. I was forced to eat fish a lot but I hate it. I was allowed to go picnic with my neighbor's child. I was supposed to wash the dirty dishes and vacuum the house very well then go out for playing. My full name is fatemeh naami. I was born and raised in Ahwaz, Khuzestan. I moved to Tehran at the age of 20. I can be very reliable at everything. I'm impeccable in speak Arabic. I'm supportive of my family and friend. I'm an accomplished at cooking.

Vary nice Mahbanoooo:))! Thank you so much! Good writing, well done! -- Hi,I'm mahsa.==> Mahsa not mahsa I was born and raised in Tehtran,Iran. I've been lived in tehran whole my life.( I have lived) I'm tallented in horse riding and making statues and etc. (Talented) I have good taste in music.I love Enrique Iglasias! I'm supportive of my friends and i help them very much if i can @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ Hi,i'm negar yavarnejad When i was a chid my parents made me upkeep my brothers because he is younger than me and possible event for his. (What do you mean, possible event for his????!!!) They let me go to the park and play with my friends but didn't let me go out of home at night.==> let+ base form I was forced to me thodie of room and didn't tell die. ===>check this sentence I was forced to....??? I was allowed to go to the friend house and home,i should play camputer just a little time.===>> "I" is always capital I was suppored to study my lesson even now.===> you should say I am supposed I though my parents were no strictest and no easy_going,At the end of i thanks my parents because gived alot of guide and helped me in the life. Negar dear checkyour writing again: ===> I thought my parents...were neither strict nor easygoing...I thank ...guidance...gived????GAVE is correct. @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ -  Hi, I'm **Zeynab Fetanat** When I was a child, my parents made me clean my room. They didn't let me watch adult programs in TV.==> on TV I was forced to sleep at noon when I came back home from school, that was very hard and it is a bad memory in my childhood, because when I had to sleep, my friends were played in the street and I hear their sounds.===> were playing My parents specialy my mother didn't allow me===> to go not go/ go to my friends' home at night and sleep there, but at least they let me invite my friends when ever I wanted. I was born and raised in Tehran. I have never syudied in university and I started to work in an office when I graduated from highschool. ===> studied I work in notary. ==> a I like my job. I tell poem some times.( sometimes/ compose poem) I got married 2 years ago. I can speak Turkish. My sister love me but I don't like her. ==>loves me:)) I laughed a lot! ---hi im nilofar fatemi when i was a child my parents let me, i went to yard with my friends and played together. my father was very supportive and always encouraged me to continue playing santoor .i learned santoor very well i enjoyed piano more than santoor. but my father was forced me to learn santoor he liked traditional musical instrument.
 * some things you don't know aboute me: **

i was born and raised in tehran ,iran. iwent to english class at the age of 17. i can be good in arts,i like to learn all of the musical instrument, but its very hard... i go to uni and im fourth semester , i read law i will probably becom a rich and famous lawyer. im humble of my close friends. istarted learning the azari dance. i like to dance with my friends in my birthday!! :)) =)) @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@